“Living Off the Grid” Apparently Means Living Away from Solid Influences

Tod “Thirteen Hawks” Goldberg has the last word on The Traveler:

What the bio fails to mention and what the publisher might have failed to note was that, “John Twelve Hawks doesn’t know how to write dialog.” In addition, “John Twelve Hawks never was told that pages and pages of expositional dialog broken up with meaningless secondary action isn’t engaging.”

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