1. “epitaphic” I’d give you an A just for that, but the rest of it is very nicely done as well. Though I’d like to see “talent to watch” banned from all reviews in any art form forever, so A-.

  2. Yeah, sorry about the conclusion. I agree. I take full responsibility, but I was on deadline. The original one was far worse. If it’s any consolation, the Newday editors feel the same as you do.

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